this was a good book but it needs more information to make it interesting to read. this book has a alot of good parts in it but it just needs to be a bit more describing parts.
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Friday 24 June 2016
Monday 13 June 2016
Three little pigs
I think the story of the three little pigs is really cool.
You can tell it is a fairy tale because it has a happy ending(not for the wolf though).
Throughout the story you can tell that the little pigs are learning because they finally figure out that bricks are the best building material to build a house out of. They also out smart the wolf.
Friday 10 June 2016
Awesome Canoe Trip
On Wednesday the 8th of June half of our class went on a canoe down the river beside our school.
We left school at 9:00 to were James was, our instructor. We did some briefing and then set out.
We first learned how to ferry glide which is canoeing across the river sideways.
We went down the Mot river going through rapids and lots of other cool and fun obstacles. There were no capsizes which is good and bad we all wanted to see another person capsize but didn't want to capsize ourselves. When we had to stop for lunch most people got there shoes wet but we all stayed happy none the less. We went to the peninsula bridge beside our school to pack up the canoes. After packing up we went for a freezing swim in the river, everyone jumped in and instantly jumped back out. The next group will be going on the 15th of june I hope they have as much fun as we did.
Tuesday 7 June 2016
I think the bills goats gruff is a great story for kids that are 3 and over.
I don't like the part where the goats walked over the bridge and the goat said you should eat my brother because he's bigger and the other goat does the same thing it's not like he's your brother or anything.
I liked the part when the oldest goat goes up to the troll and ems into him and he falls of the bridge.
I also like how many people made different story on it makes the story so muck bigger than it actually is.
Overall I think it's a great story.
I don't like the part where the goats walked over the bridge and the goat said you should eat my brother because he's bigger and the other goat does the same thing it's not like he's your brother or anything.
I liked the part when the oldest goat goes up to the troll and ems into him and he falls of the bridge.
I also like how many people made different story on it makes the story so muck bigger than it actually is.
Overall I think it's a great story.
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