Wednesday, 16 March 2016

the sour burst

                                    VThe sour burst                                                                                                          

I taste the sourness burst into my mouth as i bite down on the whole thing  at once I try and try to hold it in but i just cant handle it.

 My face  scrunching up  like  I  was about to explode.It was so sour I couldn't take it any more I chewed  and chewed until i could swallow it .Finally it was all over the sourness still tingled in my mouth for a  while when it was all over I laughed  at my self and  others because it was so funny watching peoples reactions.   

BY Rebecca . Doe

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